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You don't need to apologize for these kinds of mistake, you are not a professional author who makes Novels like Harry Potter, so far I only seen you create 2 novels including this one. I'm fine with chapters that are not solely focus on Games, but fighting is really not compatible with these kind of stories you are creating with. The Readers expect the MC to create Games and Triumph other Competitors through games and mind. Not force punching like these chapter. When creating a Stories, always know what Type of Readers you want. Some want Sunshine and rainbows, romance, and heartwarming, some action pack, heart wrenching, breath taken, blood pumping and brutal novels. This Novel is more sided with Casual Readers who want to read the MC making games and seeing the Players and Competitors reaction, general more calm and peaceful. What you shown to readers in this chapter is the opposite of that. So the readers dislike this unlike the other Non-Game Related Chapters. (Dating, Holiday, Family Bonding, etc.) You don't need to apologize since if you are only making this Novel as a hobby and to pass time then do whatever you want. I have seen this type of authors who makes disorganized Chaotic Theme and Setting with low readers count but still writing because it's genuinely was created as a hobby and to pass time. BUT! If you create this Novel to become successful and popular then you need to follow the theme and setting of your novel and satisfy that specific readers who loves those type of theme and setting. So If you truly want to make this novel as a way to put all of your random idea's and mush them into this novel, then you don't need to apologize and just ignore them, or take note and hope to not make the same mistake again. At the end of the day. This is your Novel you can do everything you want.

I'm only for reading Game Development stuff... Not this, I don't care if he some abilities or not I'm just here for the Game Stuff like the Title Suggest. Only Games. So i am disappointed that it breaks away from it. If the Core Setting and Theme is around Video Games then make it around Video Games, sure you can add some things unrelated to games once in a while, but this is too far ahead. It feels like reading one of those Fighting Novels and it's Unnecessary for these type of Novel. I only just want Game Development Novel man. If You or I want to read action pack fighting blood pumping Novel, there are tons of it which solely focuses on that specific Theme and Setting.

Ok. 👍

Please know the purpose of this Novel, It's Game Related not some Fighting Stuff. You already made it clear that you will solely focus on Game Stuff, I don't mind him going into Animation Industry since it's understandable thinking logically when put in a situation like that, it's best to catch them all. But this. Just have no purpose, yeah probably meant to "soften" the Strict Father, But there are other ways to do it, like seeing the FMC happy being with the MC then reminding him of how he met his wife or smt. This Novel is great being a Game Development Novel Just don't put some Non-Game Related stuff like this one please.

What the F is this?

🦫 It! Cliff Hanger!!

To bad the MC has a superpower XD

Can anyone Invest in anything?