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Glad you enjoy it

i don't have any..... for now, just wanna finish the first book to gather audience base then i ll think about it neext

Im very appreciate

Text wall. Ranting about human resources. I advice skip this chapter

Overall the story is bad (i dropped around chapter 84). All the crying, all the pov changing that just ruined my experience. Whats the point of the opening drama? I dont know. Whats the point of the power scaling? I dont know. Whats the point of status panel took the 1/4 chapter length? I DONT FKING KNOW. This novel touched some fetishes if me and i like that a lot but the writing style and the slice of life aspect just bad, real bad. If you want to know how to forge some dagger, kinfe that take 2 whole goddamn chapters (without anything exciting kept me reading) then this novel is for you. If you want to switch from current timeline to the past (around 12 chapters) to tell the readers the mc trauma then dont so it abruptly. Why did you want the reader feel sympathy (even pathetic) to the mc? I really found it hard to fathom TLDR: Bad novel. The author just go with the flow and write anything poped up in his mind

a slice of life chapter. Boring to be honest

Useless chapter. I recommend readers skip this. Probably author will never use those skills anyway

Fking rambling texts. A whole chapter just to monologue

Stupid reason to go away

This chap is boring. You gotta do a better fighting scene