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Ahmed_M_Oshey8mthコメントI hate lighting abilities, they are too over used
Chapter 4 - Thunder- Ahmed_M_Oshey9mthコメント
The fight from first person perspective feels weird and awkward, you should write fights from 3rd person or narrator perspective. Otherwise it's all good, nice chapter and cool ability, though <nightmare> doesn't really seem like a nightmare more like a cheat
この段落は削除されました。 - Ahmed_M_Oshey9mthコメント
Wake up sunless, your nightmare is over 😂😂😂😂😂
この段落は削除されました。 - Ahmed_M_Oshey9mthコメント
Like when nami hits luffy, he somehow stop being rubber😂😂😂😂😂
And, somehow, the bites hurt him! How?! - Ahmed_M_Oshey9mthコメント
Duuuuuuude whyyyyy? Author what's up, why is this. This is him getting a slave just using different words because no complete stranger would sleep hugging each other. So this shouldn't happen
Mia slept right on my arm. Her steady breathing proved that she was still fast asleep, nowhere close to waking up. - Ahmed_M_Oshey9mthに返信 MotivatedSloth
He could have just refused to help her if he doesn't a slave. He will gain absolutely nothing from helping her. And he would be standing for his morale...and stuff.
"But what would you say about becoming my partner?" - Ahmed_M_Oshey9mthコメント
Nice joke, mages and politician are similar in that they can change the world with world😂😂😂😂😂👌
"Haah..." I released a deep sigh before heading for the stairs. There was no use cursing the reality. I wasn't some kind of mage or politician to change the world with my words alone. - Ahmed_M_Oshey9mthコメント
The world couldron remind of harry potter, the potion class. Ahh Good times
He slowly guided the Qi to enter the cauldron and split it into 2 portions. Both portions of the Qi started to condense the powder into 2 separate balls. - Ahmed_M_Oshey9mthに返信 Exodia
I keep hearing this a lot what do you mean by"forced" ?. What exactly is forced about it ?
The condition was a minimum combined age of 15,000. Because everyone in the grade was between the ages of 14 and 16 the way it worked out was 14,999. Which left room for a one-year-old to join. - Ahmed_M_Oshey9mthに返信 NoSchool_Arc
Game of thrones
The word may have reached tens of million words and the novel doesn't always show the MC part but covers all the significant characters from his rival life story to some of his enemy life stories. - Ahmed_M_Oshey9mthコメント
He should hate them. It makes no sense, if someone is attacking a person you love it's natural to hate them. ITS HUMAN REACTION.....blah..blah.iam tired if writing more😑🙃
Leonel couldn't find it within himself to hate them. Even if they bore down on the only woman that had ever stirred his heart, he realized now how right he was not to kill them in a rage. These were men who deserved his respect. Even in the face of power so much greater than their own, they put everything they had on the line. - Ahmed_M_Oshey9mth発表
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Your story concept is great👌.you could have them make an organization or something, I always liked stories that shows certain mc influence and changes they made to the world
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Reminds me of Garb luffys granfather
"Sigh, but you could have used the teleportation gate..." the guild member left behind said, watching Nathan take off towards Soran. - Ahmed_M_Oshey10mthに返信 Ancient_Egyptian
This is very funny😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😭😂😂😂😂
"I wish I could see a day when lord not only show the world his valour and might but also lead the kingdom to a prosperous era." - Ahmed_M_Oshey10mthに返信 Darkensioner
Hahaha
Knowing this, Heydon dared not play any tricks. Even an Earl was unable to escape, how could he, a mere viscount take this risk? Although he liked beauties, he liked his life even more. - Ahmed_M_Oshey10mthコメントCh 2 Jason
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Does this mean the night came? Or is this the for shadowing for.something or someone
While daydreaming and thinking about his advantages of reincarnation. Elric didn't seem to notice the strange shadow that enveloped his back.