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Thanks, I appreciate it, same to you
....Thanks i guess, still learning so if you could tell me exactly what made it rubbish, i can work on it in the future
Thats pretty accurate, you're really good at this you know, maybe take a crack at your own fic, i would read it.
Thanks and same to you
i realy apreciate this, thank you
thanks man i apreciate the feedback, and I hope you enjoy the coming chapters as well
yeah, that's what i was actually going for
You raise some great points, and you're absolutely right—this hasn’t been explained yet in the story. But I do clearly remember when Viserys and Corlys made the marriage pact. One of the terms they agreed on was that the child born of Rhaenyra and Laenor would carry the Velaryon name until they ascended to the throne, at which point they would be called Targaryen. Throughout the story, you’ll see that some characters refer to him as Velaryon, while others call him Targaryen. I hope that helps clarify things and gets you curious enough to give it a read.
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Ofcourse, I like ATLA, who doesn't, but the name was one that came to me, just now realized that was the name of that one water tribe avatar LOL