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i don't even why webnovel is ignoring it
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This guy is Just straight up trolling mc i already like the guy
yeah that one
from which novel is this yun che from I think i remember but i also forgot
I don't know what to say about the story it is very well written one of best fanfic i have read it cannot get any perfect than this in my opinion and the original story plotholes was also covered and those who are wondering if its dropped no it is competed and chapters are very long like really long so i would say give it a try
Damn! you went plus ultra for this fic man it is great story the way you describe his ambition and drive the way story is unfolding is simply exhilarating if and your making every character feel alive every character has their sides in the story not to much and not to less just perfectly balanced it is good story i recommend to at least give it a try
its's pretty good novel overall story development is very good i have read like 70 chapters and its's immersive character design is pretty realistic mc doesn't have hero complex he does hero work but on his own terms and is more like an anti hero doesn't gives shit about anything and has pretty loose motal value writing quality is excellent and World background is pretty solid without plotholes
bro I read like 10-15 chapters and story and character development are going pretty good it made me hooked to the story l the only fault I could find in this story is grammatical mistakes which is holding this story back but it cand be improved and if you fix some errors here and there it will make the story mor entertaining without having correcting mistakes ourselves when reading. Good work and thank you for translation 😊 👍🏻