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Kekei

Kekei

Lv3
2023-02-10 入りましたGlobal
8.6h

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  • Kekei
    Kekei10mth
    発表

    Alright i was here since the first day and i can confidently say this novel didn't fall out of my expectations sometimes it even proved to be better, my only problem here is that the updates take like forever i mean it's chapter release was good(not satisfying) one chapter a day and then it became like one to two chapters a week, you can't do this to us!!!😡🤬

    The Magus: Echoes of the forgotten
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  • Kekei
    Kekei10mth
    に返信 Truth_seekers

    you are so attentive i didn't notice that part

    From the sweet voice, a stifled gasp.
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  • Kekei
    Kekei10mth
    コメント

    little elyon's size💀

    After pondering the matter for a while, Elyon decided to divert his attention by picking up a book, a substantial tome that measured 20 centimeters in length and 3 centimeters in thickness. As he held it in his hands, he couldn't help but compare its size to his own little Elyon's size, murmuring to himself, "They should be about the same size." With a sly grin, he settled back behind the desk and resumed reading, although much of the content felt repetitive and mundane to him.
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  • Kekei
    Kekei10mth
    に返信 Mistigan_Reaper

    i think each one of the time frames dedicate to something like, how he spent the days in the confines of his mansion and after weeks passed by how he saw the changes on his body and later on how the more days passed how his strength increased with it...

    Weeks slipped away, and Elyon's body metamorphosed into an embodiment of strength and confidence. His preparation had rendered him better equipped to confront the obstacles that lay ahead, infusing him with a renewed sense of purpose and an unyielding determination.
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  • Kekei
    Kekei10mth
    に返信 Mistigan_Reaper

    yes i also think his growth being shackled is a bit exaggerated

    However, Elyon couldn't shake the feeling of being trapped within the confines of the duchy. While it provided him with shelter and protection, it also hindered his growth and potential.
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  • Kekei
    Kekei11mth
    に返信 Truth_seekers

    💀

    Ch 1 From Darkness to Strength
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  • Kekei
    Kekei11mth
    に返信 elbas

    thanks [img=fp]

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  • Kekei
    Kekei11mth
    に返信 elbas

    just talking to myself don't mind me 🙄

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  • Kekei
    Kekei11mth
    に返信 Kekei

    gets you how🤔

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  • Kekei
    Kekei11mth
    コメント

    It ended with a bang😭, this line always gets me.

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  • Kekei
    Kekei11mth
    に返信 elbas

    Dark lord lmao

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  • Kekei
    Kekei11mth
    発表

    Nice remake, with the grammar issue solved and the story line getting solid it's no longer just potential , it's going somewhere and i like where it's going, much 🥰 author.

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  • Kekei
    Kekei1yr
    発表

    I don't know why you all are ranting about the grammar and whatnot but the author clearly stated english is not his first language, just chill people.

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  • Kekei
    Kekei1yr
    発表

    Ooh nice beginning with this type of beginning i am expecting a lot it's been a long time since i read something interesting right from the get go

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