Shishivam

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So here's the anticipated review (lol) Anyway, I read till 70 chapters at the very moment. And here are my takes. As you can see i given this book a 4. 4 star I loved to read it as the grammar was very understandable 5 stars right there. Nothing much to say about the updating stability he is bringing up chapters quick automatically 5 Star there too. Now there are 4 stars in each of the other section such as story development the thing which deducted the point is info dumps and continue pov changes. The story does seems an interesting read, but it need to take a single path. character design yeah 4 here too as author need to put more it, and i also need to read this story futher . and last world building yes 4 too because of the lack of knowing about the world yet.

Here is what i conclude after reading this book .Firstly the writing quality of this book the details the expressiveness and dailogues were well done second comes story development which is pin point as this book is totally recommended for the readers who love story and character driven polt as each chapter marks its importance third as i said it is also have different short of characters with vast intelligence Powers and etc and each of them have their importance fourth update stability bruh thats's lit 64 is something which not all authors can pulllast 5 World buliding nothing much to say just one word magnificent

But its's not Ai i wrote this I knew people will think like this way that it was written by Ai i did edited it with Ai but not wrote with that

Woo cooler than mine ngl and your English is on next though you a native but still and the characters you know i love those characters who which I can connect and i did that with the mc keep going all the best

Only the updating is what got zero rest every aspect of this fan fic is brilliant hope you can restart this magnificent tale of dragon ball

Author here rating his own story though this is somewhat a notice for you allWhoever read my story please leave a comment or suggestions which will help me to get on topplus this work is running in WPC so provide me with power stones and each 100 power stone I will provide extra chapters

Here is my honest review this one was good read as it was my first time reading any fl and i really liked it the writing quality character world everything seems synced keep going on

Here after reading all the 10 chapters also sorry for late .so for me it's a very good and okay read , it does need some character work and little more info (not a dump rest i enjoyed as me and my wife both read it and she appreciated the main character and the concept looking forward

So here's the anticipated review ( lol)Anyway ,I read 10 chapters at the very moment.And here are my takes. As you can see i given this book a 4.4 star I loved to read it as the grammar was very understandable 5 stars right there . Nothing much to say about the updating stability he is bringing up chapters quick automatically 5 Star there too.Now there are 4 stars in each of the other section such as story development the thing which deducted the point is info dumps and continue pov changes. The story does seems an interesting read ,but it need to take a single path.character design yeah 4 here too as author need to put more it ,and i also need to read this story futher .and last world building yes 4 too because of the lack of knowing about the world yet.