Binded_Ginger

To be hero mtf

even if he gift me only basic taijutsu training method, I'll still let him see, bro is just too much of a Chad to be denied

2 ballz... for 2 chapter... brothers... I have nothing more to give...

random shi I found

fear not brothers, I will sacrifice BOTH of my ballz to bring us HOPE!

mind control that looks cool

wtf bro 💀

"Kings Engine"

Alright truthfully speaking, I was for lack of a better word "uninterested" since it wasn't in my alley to read a Invincible FF, but after searching for a new FF to read, I saw this again, so I went "why not", and all I can say is, this is nice. a little spoiler, but is acceptable Writing Quality: 4 ⭐ The writing quality is coherent which brings the logic of actual stuff and the ideas the author use quite nicely, even tho the explanation for the use of cursed technique is just that everyone has it, and telling his friends is energy manipulation, which is also true and acceptable but for me lacks a little " flair" but overall very good writing quality, it is also easy to understand and also brings some humor to the story, like mentioning Stark tower and Lexcorp (no they are not in this story), so overall a 4. Story Development : 4 ⭐ Again a 4 star, since the story itself is interesting, and it flows nicely as well, as of now it still can't be judged too quickly, since there's still more chapter to come, but the interaction is a little lacking, but also good enough to read. MC is like any other rival to a protagonists, since he's Megumi, he's calculative, and cold, examples are like Sasuke from Naruto, Aki from Chainsaw Man, Chihiro from Kagurabachi, and other "cool and cold" character, which don't get me wrong, I like them, but still they feel more like a duality to the actual protagonist, not being the protagonist. My suggestion is make the MC more down to earth, not actually Sukuna, but someone people can relate, what I'm saying is "Make em cry" cause seeing a hero cry is nicer than seeing them stand tall over and over again, maybe like Batman from certain comics which shows his humane side. Also not much interaction with character like his uncle, BUT it is still early, so all of these are just suggestion. Character Design: 3 ⭐ Dunno what chu all expect, I mix the show and the comic together so yeah, but other than that, the OC doesn't really have much description to them, like his uncle who I just picture as Uncle Ben, and some other character, but hey, I'm not saying you do stuff like the Chinese author where they say "this woman is of black descent with voluptuous bossom, and big kissable lips" Na don't, I'm saying simple character description "bald, no hair, chubby, formal" and that's all so I can properly imagine. Update Stability: 5 ⭐ Updates are massed released for now, since it just came out yesterday, so not gonna judge fast, but it seems the Author is planning to update regularly (I hope) World Background : 4 ⭐ For me personally, there's not really much world building as of now, the story is still new so I won't push too far, but I hope this will be focused more when Omni-Man attack. Verdict : 4.0 ⭐ Overall a good read if you got nothing better to do, definitely would recommend. Me writing this in a school party for the 12th graders finished exams :