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Honestly, I was going to rate this higher, but the inconsistency is just extremely annoying, the mc changes cultivation realms back and forward all the time, seriously, the author is truly mediocre to not even keep track of what the hell he is writing.

It’s honestly weird that he thinks about rape this much. Like.. why?

Nice chapter, I have to say, I’m surprised Nero still holds those ideals after being schemed agains left and right. But I do think it’s appropriate, people often find it hard to let go of their beliefs or fantasies.

I see, I appreciate the answer. I’ll give it a chance. Regardless, your other work is extremely good. Keep it up author

I like the story so far, but the mc is too laid back? Instead of training to become powerful he’s often wasting time it seems. Maybe it’ll change later? Would love if someone could tell me wether the story continues to be so light hearted or if it will change later on. I came here after reading the authors other novel, which is magnificent, but this is not up to that standard so far.

Yeah, but not only that, he awakened his powers and like 1 week later he’s stronger than his dad and everyone else? It feels too rushed.

Wow, I have to say this novel was quite surprising, much better than I expected. The writing is good, the characters are well written and the world building/power system are intricate and full of mysteries. It’s shaping up to be a pretty long novel, and I’m all for it. This could easily be a 2k+ chapters banger if the author maintains this kind of flow. I’m super curious about the next power levels and about the professions! Very good job so far author, keep it up.

How come he hasn’t investigated the mental aspect of his ability though, after it calmed him down when he faced those soldiers I thought he would definitely want to find out more about it.

That ability of his flame to cool his emotions down is crazy useful, he better not be an idiot and master that asap.

I’m not sure if this changed in the later chapters, but man, why are you not separating paragraphs? It makes the story so tedious to read, I’m trying to give it a chance but idk how many more chapters I can read if there’s no spacing. Not trying to bash the author or anything, just constructive criticism; it really makes it hard to read, hope you can change that.