Look I'm not really a fan of reading in particular but this book is like I'm seeing the character. That's why to show my encouragement I will try to comment on the first and last chapter 😁
The character design is beautiful and the way you mixed the I don't know .it's just beautiful!!!! .But the setting is okay I guess.i m not a writer though but the characters, Levi in particular is wonderful.Please don't ever stop writing
It maybe short true and may seem baseless but it's an amazing new style.Besides who said that prologue have to be long? it is you who is cli che.sticking to what it's common.abeg e!! The prologue is perfect!!!
The book is great but the development is okay and the story is averagely expressed.Im sure it will improve.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]