Priyanka_Chaudhary_5419

just for the event. ....................

Did the author forget to write chapters for this story?

The questions of the villagers, their expressions, the condition of their village, their names, their hesitations, all this needs to be explained in a better way. The process of making soap and from where the materials for making soap were collected, all this had to be explained.

topic achchha hai par thoda jyada detail main batane ki jarurat hai keep going you can improve

li shao

Li shao

thanks for explaining

thanks for explaining

Do you want to scare him or see him get lost in your handsomeness