WinterGiantKing

is this chapter describing Amori's hatsu because it really boring if it is. you said before he was a manipulator not a specialist. when i first here it i thought he would have sum interesting power like biological control or at lest some elemental power like firebending to spice up the story not some small boost that only has down sides on the fights

it must be a translation because when he says thunder wave it should be quick attack and what the ursaring is described as using is hyper beam not head smash

you swapped hinata ko pic

runes

bullet seed

bullet seed

should be flash fire

It's grass/poison

I'll DO it when it feels right.

It's a good concept but the start has some problems. For one you should really think about condensing the first 5 chapter into 2. You repeat thing a lot by saying them differently. Also Nexamon Nexus doesn't roll of the tongue maybe swich it to just The Nexus.