Kamon772

Currently only read the first five chapters and rather interesting start for story overall. There was a lot character building and world setting up even if it was only with mostly one character. The depth that you were able to create for Kim Hyun-gi is very interesting as well thought provoking

Good job on this chapter

Nice chapter

Interesting set up how the Caretaker warped her view of love and how men are in general it seems.

How many times must he had used that stick for it to break like that.

Interesting prologue

This story is might still be in the process of going from an idea into a story. There are chance I might just take the information given and draw it back some. There was so much of it start out because I felt that I need to know it myself first. Also wanting to get it set up before getting too far into the story thus having to stop and come with a reasoning for why what happened earlier happened. Not everyone can pull that off successfully as I only know a few authors that have managed to pull that off. Thus I try to know what happening and reveal as I go for the most part

Thanks

Would you like to read and possibly review one of mine in return?

Might I ask what about my narratives and descriptions needs work.