king_of_gods_

an image would have been brilliant author san.

I have a suggestion for the author if you don't mind that is, I think you are detailing too many scenes, so I would suggest slightly losing it and letting the viewers have their own imagination too. In some scenes you are describing it too much which sometimes seems like an info dump, viewers also have intelligence so let them understand it themselves. It's just a suggestion if you like you can give it a try, oh and I Also like your chapter length along with that short paragraph would be much appreciated thank you, I hope you have a great day.

well if you have any suggestions that is, you can comment.

I know, be patient, I am not like others to let hiruzen remain in seal.

why don't you make mc atleast 13 years old, so that he can play with his girls, in every ff I see it's always 10 years old or 8 years old, is your child complex too strong. beware fbi is waiting on your tails bro, you might be arrested.

you downgraded madara too much or is it because of MS that kakashi spirit stat is higher, like 2 physical kakashi = 1 spiritual kakashi

am i too late it should have been dark release

thank you, for metal release do tell me elements, and chakra armour will come around don't worry.

I would like to viewers to give suggestions for more kekei tota that they know or would like to tell me to add in hiruzen repertoire.

hahahaha 😂😂😂😂, don't know how to make good image from AI