Quintin_Quilario_4261

Overall... The story is very food. I just have one very irritating problem... Alex is way too passive and a pushover. At first it comes off as very kind and humble, then it became pretty stupid, to annoying then very irritating. He has all that money and connections but can't even protect is girlfriend. He literally promised to her dying mother that he would do everything to protect her daughter. It would have been ok if all those tragedy only happens to him but no, debbie suffers the worst. Actually I was kinda relieved that Debbie escaped this sorry excuse of a man, then she would probably can live peacefully. I mean if he really loved Debbie he should have announced to the whole world the she is the future Mrs. Ambrose that way no one would dare to put their hand on her. I get that he would prefer not to be seduced by a bunch of gold diggers, and like to lay low, but if he truly loves Debbie he would endures those things for her... Just want to get my thoughts out of my head and find someone to rant. And for the Author...I know it is written like this for the sake of the further part of the story, but its just too much. Who would endure something like this if they have the ability to prevents those events from happening, especially seeing his significant other being tormented. At least put some little satisfying moments every now and then. And please just kill Cathy...