Labraduble

Waste my coins*

Personally i fond this whole arc childish and nausating like come one just Get it over with in one chapter dont want to esset nu coins on this

Could you cut out the plot of gangsters going after mcs gf like first time was enough. And it makes no fucking sense what does this have to do the story, is the mc going to establish a PMC if not just cut it out because its gettig annoying to read.

I find it irritating that you always place the protagoist in situations where there are extinuating factors which he has no way of dealing with. It may appear that atticus should have known this but the only reason he exposes himeself to this was to kill all the others, but they somehow always get saved. LIke come one be consistent.

why didnt seraphim kill those in the obsidian order???

Im fucking getting irretated you say the raveinsteins are the strongest but then why are they so fucking volnerable. Ffs everything feels so forced

Please kill of luminous, no way he hets off unscratched and Alive after all that

he better have broken through paragon

what did lucas mean with not yet??????

Yeah, I totally owe you an apology for that one. My bad! Turns out my filter went on vacation and left me to fend for myself. Seriously though, upon further reflection (and a much-needed chill pill), I gotta hand it to you –your book is solid. Seriously, you've got skills. I even took a second dip into your book, and let me tell you, it's like diving into a pool of awesome sauce. You've got some serious talent, my friend! But hey, let's not dwell on the past. I'm here to rebuild bridges, not burn 'em! From now on, I promise to think before I speak... well, most of the time anyway. 😜 And hey, just a little reminder from your friendly neighborhood pal: don't let the negativity get you down! We're all just trying to navigate this crazy world of creativity together, right? Anyway, lets keep supporting each other in our respective literary pursuits.