RetroZeb

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I'd say it's balanced. I want to go for a realistic feel, more of a slice of life, along with the adventure, action and combat. I want to build a world for everyone to become emmersed in. Time will only tell how it goes, but I know for sure it wont be too dark or too light hearted. But a mix

thanks for the support!! next chapter releasing tomorrow!

I nearly had a stroke reading this. Holy s***

Nice going! definately a read you should check out! when is the next chapter releasing? Good luck with the writing and keep up the good work

Some nice writing, would like some more chapters though, so if you could write a bit more that would be great Goodluck with the writng and keep up the good work

honestly i'm clueless read the first three chapters writing is below average genuinly confused, though maybe i am misunderstanding. not that interesting not worth a read i dont think.

Have really enjoyed writing this novel so far, its done wonders for my writing ability. I hope to carry this on far into the future to create a world everyone can read and enjoy.

I really like the concept. Its got a solidly written base idea and is a good novel as far as I've read. looking forward to see where it goes.