I am a beginner author, I enjoy reading novels, and I wanted to try writing a novel, so I write its negatives and positives, and your opinion about it
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The fate of pain confronts Natsu
When he was training, I didn't know that the wind field was so strong
This is a different system because awareness is linked to lust, so awareness is unique from other systems, as you will see in the next chapters
Thanks, I will try to post some chapters
A minute of silence for the Black Mask
I loved this novel, it is very good, as the author was creative in it, as he wrote a main character wonderfully and skillfully, good and enjoyable dialogues between characters, and wonderful work in the sequence of events of the story. Although his interventions are many in the plot, there are not many changes in the future and are noticeable on the level. Far away, so please improve this aspect to see at least a main character, the consequences of changing events, but the novel remains very good. I recommend it because it is one of the best ongoing novels at the present time.
This novel is good. I don't know how to explain it. It is a novel, although it has few chapters, it is interesting. The author was creative in this novel, as he put a new idea that you do not see in other novels, so I strongly recommend reading it.
No, if there are other novels similar to it, because I have not read a story like it, so it is not repetitive, and the consistency in writing is very good. It is a good novel, as you will not get bored with it, but it is short, as there are not many chapters. I completed it in a day, but I recommend it, as it is good, and this is my opinion. Personal only
It is a good novel, a little better than rubbish these days, so it is average to good. This is my personal evaluation, Sabyatha. The story is very slow, as the writer extends small events for several chapters, even though they are not worthy, but what is good about it is explaining the balance of power or skills, which is the writer’s creativity and not the same as other novels, so I give it my rating of 7.5/10