Light or Dark which do u prefer
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the relationship between the mc and edyth was a zero then went to 100 in two chapters it doesn't make sense
it would have been better if he wasn't op,and was strong,add a few rivals with equal power,with interesting power dynamics and expansive world buildings
none of them
chatgpt am guessing
you should set a limit for his talent,i mean it's an sss rank talent, everything got to have a weakness and he's a goblin and plus he can't be the only individual in the whole story with a sss rank talent.you can use his talent to develop a fighting style but still a limit
ruined novel ruined
by joey do you mean joey diaz
still not given a good reason to accept a death sentence of a quest
why is he listening to the guild master like a slave
he sacrificed his fear and in that chapter you described him a emotionless and i beloievehe sacrificed his emotions and sense of taste