SAzuraS

Interesting story! Although there are too many details, I can see where this story is going and I hope it will only increase with the chapters, keep it up ^^

Amazing book cover and the prologue describes everything incredibly well, you started the story off great and I hope you continue, so keep it up! ^^

The story is interesting, although it could use more dialogue, but I see a lot of potential in it, which I hope you will use or are already planning to use. I hope you continue and keep it up! ^^