Chryst_AO

Maybe I'll post the next chapter on Saturday or Sunday, I couldn't make progress as quickly

Most likely, I'll release the next chapter tomorrow.

Thank you for your comment. At the moment, I don’t have any active social media accounts. Honestly, I haven’t given it much thought, but if I ever decide to create one, I’ll be sure to let you know.

As a self-respecting author, I’m giving my story a 5-star rating 👀. I look forward to your feedback—thank you for reading!

Well, honestly, it could be a very subjective opinion. For some, something more realistic might be more boring, but in my case, it’s the opposite. A process that is so simple and forced doesn’t convince me. I prefer more development and that it's well-grounded in how the protagonist overcomes difficulties and makes their way in the industry. It’s the same with the aspect of having a system where you just upload a game and wait. In some stories, I tolerate this, but there are other novels I like much more because they show how someone creates at least part of the game themselves. 👍🏻

I love novels that have this concept of taking video games to another world. Honestly, I had high hopes for this novel, but unfortunately, I didn’t end up liking it. Like in some novels with this theme, the process that the protagonist follows here is very silly. From simply copying and pasting the game, it magically goes super viral. There are forced plotlines, like how streamers get stuck in the game because it’s too difficult. We’re talking about Pokémon—no one is that dumb. But here, it seems like they’re playing Dark Souls, to the point where no one can beat the Pokémon game, and they have to ask the designer for help (who, by the way, did nothing more than upload the game). Another silly plot is how they slander the game for being incomplete, and then the designer solves it with a live stream, only for the next chapter to show that it really was incomplete. The protagonist says they need to buy consoles and connect to a local network to trade Pokémon, and even mentions that you don’t have access to Mewtwo on the PC version. But magically, no one cares, and they see it as something novel. In other words, the plots are very forced and illogical; the story wasn’t well executed. At least others try harder to make the process more believable. That’s my humble opinion, thanks for reading.

The story was so-so, honestly, I expected more. It’s supposed to be the world of HOTD, but its characters are simply forgotten or NPCs without much dialogue or personality. Some aren’t even mentioned, they're just referred to as "Takagi and the others," or they're not mentioned at all. This story works more as a simple survival story in an apocalypse, and that's it. Remove the HOTD factor and it would be the same: a cold and ruthless MC who becomes the strongest very early in the story, and the rest is just about how he unlocks things from his system and collects resources. There's not even something fun like a harem or comedy, so that's my honest critique.

I love the idea of going to another world and using your knowledge whether in video games, movies, etc. and this story started relatively well, but it declined too quickly, you can take this as a criticism and personal opinion based on my tastes. First, the fact that the enemy is overcome very easily, if there is no conflict or he is not a match for the MC then things become boring or monotonous, it is even sad to see that they cannot do anything against the protagonist. Second, the system is too broken, I understand that that makes things easier but as I said before, this means that the protagonist no longer had an enemy or conflict and even does such unrealistic things outside the logical limits of the current technology of that world and To justify it they simply resort to the script with lame excuses. Third, the MC is very stupid many times, with such a broken system he makes stupid and really dangerous mistakes, like not putting invisible limits on a game and letting everyone see an entire virtual world. Fourth, why would you use the lousy and stupid RE movies? I mean, you have a complete and well-loved game franchise that could have been used and would you prefer to juggle creating games based on a movie saga that was an insult to RE? Well, those would be all my problems with this story, I don't know if others think the same but hey, take it as a reference, it's just my subjective opinion.