MarvelDoaist

Nice!

My pick is author gonna make Fen girl as elder Thanks for the chapter.

So far so good, the author has done his research pretty well... The naminga of people are a bit awkward. But that's for me and story is kind of slow paced, but i love it. Expecting to see a wondeful struggles of the cave man.

Thanx for the chap

Li Ping - The best buddy Yi Ran - Previous version of MC when he was just normal with a good a character that yearns for growth in life. Dong Xu - A big brother character for MC, who corrects and teacher figure

Thanks for the chapter author!

Finally somone that doesn't like mc [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Thorough explanation on scenes and the story narration is pretty good! Character introduction is the best so far, with a good amount of emotions in each character, including the gods. Especially the color divison of souls....I'm kinda hooked with the detailed description of these parts. And the cons are author needs to work on his grammar wise, that's it. This book has a very good concept, that brings back some memories...Hope veryone give it a try. Note: Book is still in early stage... I will update my review later

A very good novel to those that want an action novel! We need more chapters author. So far enjoying the reads, quality wise is also pretty good[img=update][img=update]!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!