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SKMnovels

SKMnovels

Lv11
2022-11-19 入りましたNigeria
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18.4h

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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels10d
    に返信 batman_3_3_

    Just keep reading lol

    "Don't use your quirk on humans so easily. The backlash could range from a headache to your brain imploding," she warned, her tone serious.
    MHA: I have the strongest quirk!
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels12d
    に返信 Silent_Killer_6981

    That sounds logical but the next chapter will show you why that won’t work.

    Ch 3 I Want To Kill You Even More
    MHA: I have the strongest quirk!
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels14d
    に返信 Cutejohn1234

    Every quirk has limits, but imagining death is possible.

    [Quirk name: I Imagine!]
    MHA: I have the strongest quirk!
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels5mth
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    Hard to read because I felt I had to remember too many things and my attention span couldn’t keep up. Work on your chapter and please, put a synopsis

    Ch 1 Wedge
    Player NO.1
    ファンタジー · TheresaChavez
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels5mth
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    Drool with envy? Really? Simply “filled with envy” would’ve sufficed

    His teammates were similarly equipped, all in epic gear, a formidable lineup. Any player here would drool with envy. Even though "Eternity" had been running for years, most players still struggled for a piece of dark gold equipment; epic gear was nearly mythical!
    Player NO.1
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels5mth
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    After saying “…Jason’s gear was all epic quality…” use a semi colon before describing his gear.

    Jason's gear was all of epic quality, his light blue robe flowing with magical runes, his crystal blue staff shimmering, and his accessories glinting with a red hue — the unique glow of epic gear.
    Player NO.1
    ファンタジー · TheresaChavez
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels5mth
    コメント

    Another grammar error

    Jason's gear was all of epic quality, his light blue robe flowing with magical runes, his crystal blue staff shimmering, and his accessories glinting with a red hue — the unique glow of epic gear.
    Player NO.1
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels5mth
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    Using the apostrophe is not necessary anymore and you also incorporated it wrongly.

    Jason and his team were currently venturing into the top dungeon of "Eternity," the "Frost Crown" in hell mode. This mode had never been conquered, with the leaderboard still empty.
    Player NO.1
    ファンタジー · TheresaChavez
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels5mth
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    You’ve already made it clear that it is a game, no need for repetition. Also, there is an error there; Jason played AS a grand mage

    In "Eternity," a fantasy game, Jason played a grand mage. After several years of operation, most players in this world had reached the maximum level, including Jason.
    Player NO.1
    ファンタジー · TheresaChavez
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels5mth
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    First things first, why don’t you have a synopsis?

    Wedge
    Player NO.1
    ファンタジー · TheresaChavez
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels5mth
    に返信 just_stay

    I look forward to that

    この段落は削除されました。
    PANDORA-Rise of the fool
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels5mth
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    Wasn’t even able to read the chapter because I couldn’t get any tangible info from it. Once again “show not tell” so if you can work on it, please do.

    Ch 1 SHINIGAMI
    PANDORA-Rise of the fool
    ファンタジー · just_stay
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels9mth
    に返信 Fi3l

    On a side note, rate the book outta 10 and reason for rating.

    Ch 30 One year later
    Marvel: Alpha Superhero System
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels9mth
    に返信 Fi3l

    Understandable since the time skip shows him having 60+ abilities. Thanks I’ll do that

    Ch 30 One year later
    Marvel: Alpha Superhero System
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels9mth
    に返信 Fi3l

    Thoughts? I accept all kinds of criticism

    Ch 30 One year later
    Marvel: Alpha Superhero System
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels1yr
    コメント

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    この本は削除されました。
  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels1yr
    コメント

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    この本は削除されました。
  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels1yr
    コメント

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    この本は削除されました。
  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels1yr
    コメント

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Start of a New World
    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    ゲーム · Galanar
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  • SKMnovels
    SKMnovels1yr
    コメント

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Start of a New World
    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    ゲーム · Galanar
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