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5 stars Just because you be updating this story 38 times a week….
I would say it’s pretty good and you should check it out :)
I feel like my whole life is a lie… I don’t know why but I thought you were a female.. great story though! Definitely going to continue reading!
Update: The story improves drastically at about chapter 538 ish. It feels a lot more like how the earlier chapters felt and is a massive improvement over what was previously being written. If you’re able to handle that little patch of(in my opinion) lower quality chapters then I’d highly recommend continuing to read.
Because why not give myself a 5 star review?
Ok thanks was kinda confused about that but it makes more sense now. Keep up the good work :)
This is just respectful criticism(sorry if it comes off as rude) for the author and I overall still really enjoyed the story and will continue reading it: Kinda confused because it was said that Kat can’t go so long without having her “bloody fun”(during chapters 200 to 300 it was implied multiple times if I remember correctly) but it hasn’t been really talked about at all since like chapter 416. That’s over a hundred chapters of that part of her being completely nonexistent. I understand that other stuff was happening but it doesn’t even show that she’s wanting to go kill something like it had in previous chapters beforehand. In the last couple chapters it even seemed like she didn’t enjoy killing things for fun like she used to and now she only cares about getting the experience. Again I understand that they are focused on getting stronger and everything but there were multiple times when they had rest days that she could of used to satisfy her bloodlust instead of completely ignoring it. If you do ignore it you could of made her personality change slightly due to her not being able to satisfy her bloodlust like you did before when she snapped and killed the adventurers that were hitting on them. I just don’t understand why that part of her character would be put on the back burner when it’s been a big part of her personality so far.
As someone who read this when it was only at 350 chapters before recently coming back to it: I really like it but after about chapter 400 ish it starts feeling extremely repetitive and AI generated. This sucks because it feels like the writing has taken a step back and it’s not like it’s the end of the world but it’s definitely something you’ll notice and start getting bothered by.
Love this author and this story is great so far.
What the main character looks like (roughly)