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I don't feel like reading it, my bad. I'll read it later, maybe when the second chapters out. QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ
Honesty, decent story. The first Impressions weren't the best, but after reading it through it's easier to get comfortable with the writing style. I don't rly give this a five star, but I don't have a choice. I can't rate the character design for obvious reasons, and Stability of Updates, well, I have no clue what that means. The story was definitely there, I just hope the next chapter is a bit more plot like. Some of it was a bit repetitive, but the writing quality is good, but I feel like more of a 4 star. For the world background it's developed for 1 chapter, though my opinion you could be more creative than "Ohio". Enjoy your five star review, this better not be a knockoff.