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CALLUM_HA

CALLUM_HA

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2022-11-08 入りましたGlobal
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  • CALLUM_HA
    CALLUM_HA2 years ago
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    Stranger things knock off.

  • CALLUM_HA
    CALLUM_HA2 years ago
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    I don't feel like reading it, my bad. I'll read it later, maybe when the second chapters out. QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

  • CALLUM_HA
    CALLUM_HA2 years ago
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    Honesty, decent story. The first Impressions weren't the best, but after reading it through it's easier to get comfortable with the writing style. I don't rly give this a five star, but I don't have a choice. I can't rate the character design for obvious reasons, and Stability of Updates, well, I have no clue what that means. The story was definitely there, I just hope the next chapter is a bit more plot like. Some of it was a bit repetitive, but the writing quality is good, but I feel like more of a 4 star. For the world background it's developed for 1 chapter, though my opinion you could be more creative than "Ohio". Enjoy your five star review, this better not be a knockoff.