Shivam_Pandey_4996
Lv11
2022-10-28 入りましたGlobal
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Shivam_Pandey_49962 years ago発表I assuming his is your first time writing, it's good. More effort needed, except MC, other character look good to me. Story need to slow and explained. World Background null, give it a time.
- Shivam_Pandey_49962 years agoに返信 World_Devourar
sure enough, f**k if he just more careful at time of his weeding night, his will never happen and he got all women's also