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How about this for the chapter title the beginning of a new end.
Simipour - the geyser Pokémon
Thanks for the chapter
Thanks you for chapter
What I mean for him to use a specific ability like Choso Flowing red stack to boost his physical strength for like a support gu worm when he use during battle like when he used the blood moon gu worm in the being in novel that doesn’t use anymore later in the novel. He doesn’t need to have use blood path as his main path and I think using Akaza demon blood art as gu worm is good idea for fighting style as it offers close and mid range attack it’s your story how you want to go with it and I like it very much it just my honest opinion.
I know fang yuan decided to go with Strength path Because blood path was Considered demonic path For the righteous path in his past life. But its just for him to start with at Gu yue clan then change to strength path for main path until he leaves qing mao mountain
How about abilities from Jujutsu kaisen Choso blood manipulation techniques, for blood path, Akaza demon blood art combat style or Ban magic power seven deadly sins for dual path gu worm of theft and strength path. Since Fang yuan was blood path gu master in his past life and later focused on strength path for most of the novel.
Glad your back and hope you continue this story and great work
I think you should fix the points system make Gu worms higher points value like rank 1 10 points, rank 2 100 points, rank 3 1000 points rank 4 points, 10,000 and rank 5 points 100,000. So you can make Fang yuan work harder for points because the point system is too unbalance making it too easy for him and having avatar summon as servant should have him suspicious and unnecessary but everything else is fine and great that just my opinion it’s yours story on how you want to write it.