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God, this is even better than the English version. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

It's almost absurd how the story seems to get better with each chapter.

I loved this. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

Overall it's good, but openly announcing and telling your abilities to an enemy is stupid. Also, there is too much talking during the fight.

My only complaint is that the characters seem to have an abnormal level of awareness about small details, which is not a problem depending on the character. However, here everyone has it. An example is one of the characters being able to notice that Devas' concern is not directed at himself but at someone else, which is a level of emotional intelligence far, far above average. And personally, I really enjoyed the points of view of other characters in the chat being shown and I think this should happen more often. Other than that, great fanfic.

Thanks for the chapter!

thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter! And 2.

Thanks for the chapters!

Thanks for the chapters!