one more thing i forgot and needs to be said if you didn't read original work you are missing a lot of other characters interactions and their development so if you are feeling it's little off it's because it is and I believe it's for a reason to speed thinks up and get to the point author can make a changes of his own.

I honestly like this so far, new character provides with new perspective. there isn't much changes of overal story and believe you shouldn't expect it at least until later on. character is well integrated, his personality leaves with enough room for development and I'm eager to see new perspective and changes he will bring.

yes, but I would have to be modified to not be so much Op and to fit in this world, like making enhancement is to much and giving his shadow semi inteligence is op as well, I'm not sure how much would be left after all that so I think it's good to work with his shadows but dont' make it as Sunny's. maybe something like enhancement of his shadow Justu to be much stronger and having a better control over it + some passive enhancement of his stamina and chakra in dark and dark places with some not strong but overal enhancement of his chakra

Hi, are posting in Patreon only from now on? thanks ☺️

well if you think about it senju and former senju should be in hundreds so it's impossible to just die off and it was told that no one from the clan remained. theory about danzo killing them in his experiments should be true wether sarutobi knew about it is another matter as Hokage he should be aware about senju dieing off, but i can see danzo taking so many of them that when sarutobi finds out he doesn't stop him as usual ...

no, there would be even less time for grind and Hermione