Iruma_kun99

As I said before it's a fan fiction and the reason why I did not reply to your previous comments, well is because you honestly look at every little detail a bit too much. Note: it's not 12 that attacked him it's 40 also their damage was not between 6-7 but 9-13. Most of what you have written was not actually true, and from this I can see why you are actually here. This will probably be my last reply to you, so please feel free to write some more long paragraphs. Of course I will take note if it is of any use.👍

If you know the game then you'll know Oran Berry does not work on poision. It heals but won't restore yourself to the previous state. So you will have to suffer from the pain it inflicts. By the way, this is a fan fiction not some real world scenario. The protagonist is not an all knowing being or smart. If you have a problem with his intellect than you're criticizing mine, but it's fine. If the story is not what your looking for then why even comment😐

Normally it does not, but considering how rare shiny are, I decided to upgrade them a little.

Well that's unfortunately won't do, since what his facing is not 1 or 2, but a swarm of Zubats.

Trading gold Sorry typo

It's based on the game, but the gold he gets is different from taking gold.

Well it's literally all tastes mashed together, I know that, but had to make something different about the protagonist.

Only when primal form, but noted✍

Yes, I also realized that after having already written the chapter, but then considering I can't actually let all of them understand one another, cause that would mean I need to break the whole story down starting from Rattata. So only certain pokemon will understand one another. The only reason I'm actually not letting Torchic understand Chamander now is to cultivate their relationship. An understanding Torchic won't make a good target to be kept in the dark and if she did understand, I'd probably have to change her personality.

Coincidence's can happen and a name's not that important.