Hey Guys... This is Suma hereð I write short stories and Novels.. please give your full support ð:) You can contact me through Discord : Suma_2038#4637 Insta ID : suma_2038
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I bet it's a bit odd to Chat in Reviews. So if you have anything to say, you can contact me through Instagram or Discord ð Insta - Suma_2038 Discord - Suma_2038#4637
I am from India ð
Hi Author. About the payment, I don't know about that yet too Sorry.ðI'll let you know if I get any info...
Ohhh...ðThank you so much. I am really thankful and I'll surely try to update more storiesð
My pleasure Author âºïž
It's Sooo Goood ðð I love it a lot... It is flawless⺠I am really far behind you and I have lot to learn from you Author... Hats off Your hardwork really paid off ð keep going
The story is really good...ð but it would be more good if you don't use povs. This was said by a well known friend of mine and she is also an author here in Webnovel. And good thing you took a military based story cuz I love it a lot hahað and if you'de like kindly check out my Story "The lost cup of Milk" and my novel which is ongoing "Parcae". And please don't get discouraged by any sorrowfull comments and just keep working on it and don't give a crap about what others say...your story just needs a little bit of fixing that's it but overall it's goodð and I will surely recommend this to my friendsð...
And if you'd wish kindly check out my Novel Parcae and the story The Lost Cup of Milk...And please give a reveiwð
The Story's not bad but All the describings seem like bragging and it would have been better without those braggings and Kindly check the spelling of each and every words. And the grammar is goodð Now I am half through the story....so, I do not know the overall concept. So please just take these as a comment from a friend and please don't take it to your heart..."The only Writer whom you should compare yourself is the writer you were YESTERDAY"...So don't get discouraged and just keep Writingð
And please do check out my new story THE LOST CUP OF MILK And comment..I just don't know how it is cuz I didn't show the story to anyone I know So I just need a honest comment from somebody who have read it