Orngebeard

Hey KW Never said it was my own work, its listed as fanfic and i posted before about how i loved the game and just wanted to share the story out there for anyone whose never played the game. Sorry if this comes across as "Disgusting" to you but i'm not trying to pass this work off as my own all Credit goes to Sierra Lee. Thanks for standing up for Sierra though the work speaks for itself and i'd love more attention to be lain on it to expand the games story beyond where it is at now as story is still left open as we all wonder how it's going to end.

Liking your newest work so far, can't wait to see where you take it and if other big names in MMA are gonna show up as Mentors, Trainers, Rivals, or even Adversaries. Don't know where you stand in the contest but hope you win.

Oh you mean the three accounts from my friends who read my book and dropped me a review after reading it rather than a troll who drops a review on the first chapter before even giving the body of work a shot.

Thanks for the review, your critism acknowledged But in the end your troll attempt matters not to me. I write for the fun of it, not to make money so faking reviews does nothing for me. If you only care about what’s on the surface rather than what’s inside the cover, please take your shallow self elsewhere to find something that has better reviews that make you want to comment on great it was they had “real” reviews rather than actually commenting on the authors attempt to create something. Happy reading of reviews

I am a fan of the early RPG's so for me I love the choices in the repetitive battle music. Nothing gets your heart racing more than to start an unknown fight and then the music drop and you're like Oh $%^& things are about to get lit!"

Well not exactly word for word, but it is my fanfic of the game yes, taking the game and bringing it to those who would rather have the narrative rather than playing a turn-based rpg. Main reason why it shall be free and never require anyone to pay to get the chance to read it :) Sorry if that goes against your standard but i enjoy the plot enough to want to share it, and if that draws more interest towards the game, and get the dev to create another version then i'll keep on a writing it.

Would anyone have preferred a less fitting end? ;)

Hey @adam_Jamaes Thanks for your review :) I'm always open to new ways to share my work, Webnovel was just the one that drew my focus first as it's where a read a couple of series's that i myself am following. If you have any recommendation i'd gladly take them

Thanks sorry bout that, tried using a AI editor for the first time, but yeah not a fan of it so I've gone back to just editing my own stuff enough that one can read it well enough.

Sorry bout that ive fixed it, Forgot to set which volume the new chapter went to. Lol