David19687

Yup

Its pretty good

in almost all countrys (all that I know) any and all Ideas you have come up with are yours any storyline any caracter you made or even if the caracters was made by someone else if you use them in your story that story the way they acted everything is yours

Pretty good story so far. actualy keeped going after the end of kronos a bit basic just hades with more powers and smarter that we have seen before.

Genjutsu Name: False order Description: Make the target think that they have diffrent orders then what they were given. Example 1: Original order was kill target A New order: kill target B Example 2: Original order was rescue squad A New order: silance squad A so they cant leak intel. think it would be fun and can be used on root agents, anbu of other villages and/or any subordinates. the genjutsu is subtle enough for it to be hard to know that you are in one

thank you for not going over all of my false and stupid opinions. and also dont worry about one bad review. also your novel will probably do very well as long as you keep it up as alot of simaly writen novels (style of writing) get pretty popular, its just not for me.

Thank you!

The problem with a haram is that it is just for gooners. I have only read like 2 storys were the Harem worked. to make romance work and be a net plus for the story you need to write the mc partner like a character and not just an extra that many haram storys do if you are planing on just adding more partners just becase it will bring down the qualety of the story. TLDR: Dont

she is right that explanes everything

Please do and Give him a beard that is as big as him