NOT_OMNISCIENT

A story for those who are interested in reading about an empty and spineless MC. The author tries to write characters not mentioned at all in the original plot (OC), but clearly does not know how. Everything looks cardboard and uninteresting. MC is just a weak-willed idiot who entrusted all his secrets to a random girl he has known for a week. His feigned modesty is what irritates me most. I read the entire first volume, and that's all I could handle. A story should grab you from the very beginning, but in this one you'll be patient.

With a clear conscience I can say that this is a hundred percent DROP, with no chance of rehabilitation. The author clearly does not know how to write holistically and clearly. There are too many incomprehensible things for one world and so many small chapters. Moreover, these are not the mysteries that intrigue and make you read with a desire to find out the outcome, but simply an incomprehensible pile of crap that is very repulsive. Where did Echidna come from? How did Ben 10 get here? Doesn’t he fit in with such a magical universe at all? Who the hell is Adam? This is clearly not the one that should be in the supernatural? Is MC a reborn or not? I don’t understand this at all, three years ago he woke up? Why did you wake up? Woke up in this body? Woke up from some kind of coma? Who is he anyway? What god took what from him? What kind of god do you mean? In the supernatural there is only one god! The author wrote too much at once, it’s unclear why. Well, in the end it’s purely for my taste. I hate it when MC authors make a stinking, disgusting and absolutely insignificant femboy. As for me, these characters are added just to laugh at them. So, from the very beginning, the MC is a complete loser who is played as he pleases by everyone. So my final decision is that this is definitely not mine.

Purely my opinion. It’s hard for me to believe that a person who, according to him, first lived a life where he was alone since childhood, and he had to grow, harden, and, in principle, become a more self-confident person, then spent God knows how long in the darkness , behaves like a fifteen-year-old schoolboy who blushes and gets embarrassed at almost everything. No seriously, I read 10 chapters and in each of them he is embarrassed by something. Secondly, he’s so fucking soft and spineless, they attacked him just for fucking fun, he crushed them a little and let them go, supposedly to convey a message. Did you want to send a message to tell them to fuck off? I would cut off a limb for each, maybe then it would come to fruition. Thirdly, and this personally makes me wish for you, the author, that all DOOM fans would come to your home and kick you. BECAUSE IMAGE OF A FUCKING KITSUNE. SERIOUSLY?!?! You could come up with so many different transformations for him, for example, a halo like Herrscher of the End, or energy wings like Kiana. But NOOOOO, you chose the dumbest possible image for a male character in this role. An image that is associated more with female characters. So he was also awarded the proud title of Doom Slayer. Just for this, author, I want to do a bitch slap in your face.

We started for health, the dick continued. No seriously, the first chapter shows a confident and even brilliant man who was able to get rich himself before the age of 30. And so you think, well, right now there will be reading about how a confident and wealthy man builds his future with the help of the power of magic and gravity. As a result, we get a snotty schoolboy who not only suffered from eighth-grader syndrome, but the only thing he thinks about is how to join the school club and how to earn extra money for food expenses. Seriously dude, what a bummer?!

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The author is an ordinary pathetic plagiarist, I have not seen anywhere that it is mentioned that this is the work of the Russian author Leon Heart. You stupidly changed the title, the original is called "Lost Hand"

The novel is not worth your time, it looks like it was written by a small kid for the same small boys, the understanding of romance is clearly at their level, the narrative is torn and basically so-so, there is no logic at all, another god in a diaper, kills seasoned men at six years old, at the age of eleven he fights against dark organizations.

God, the more you read, the worse it gets. If you can’t write romance properly, then don’t get involved in it at all. This kind of romance really makes me sick

I've read 77 chapters and what can I say. The more I read, the more sickened I became, frankly because of Alex's development. He had a layer for development into a really interesting character, but no, the author decided to better turn him into a pussyboy who indulges his women in everything, is afraid to say a word against them, because Hestia will be angry or something like that. Hestia is, in principle, one of my least favorite danmachi characters, along with Eina.