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I love the way the author has introduced the characters. I personally like the main character, she seems to have a likeable personality. Keep up the work author!

I commend the author on writing an interesting piece of work. The beginning really grasped my attention. Some grammar errors but other than that well done.

I commend the author on creating such an interesting piece of work. The novel is interesting. Just a minor comment to work on grammar but other than that well done!

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I am just starting to read and I must say I have found it very intriguing. I will definitely read more. I commend the author on this work. Keep it up!

I loved the novel. it has a good start and has a lot of potential. suggestion: Longer chapters and use more detail when writing but another than that amazing!

I love the way the author paints the characters, making me feel as if I am watching the story unfold in front of me. I commend the author on this and I hope they continue writing like this.

Very interesting start to the novel. I personally love the character development and design. I hope the author continues to write like this.

I commend the author on the building of the background of the story. I found it really interesting and I hope the author continues to write like this.

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