CultivationKing

mostly villain

Furthermore, the world is really established even three chapter in. This by itself isn’t really a problem, it’s more so terms and ideas are brought up by the author when we as the readers have no idea what’s going on. Example as In t e continues mention of tails, I assume they’re in some sort of omega verse of furry fic but Im not sure. The mention of kingdoms that don’t exist on earth makes us certain it’s set somewhere is but there are constant omages to it, e.g. cul-de-sac and cars. I wouldn’t mind an info dump here since it would help a lot

Personally I give every novel I read a 5-10 chapter read because how can you be expected to develop a story within the first chapter? I found it quite hard to read past the third chapter because of the information overload, there are lots of kingdoms and rulers mentioned in the first chapter that it’s hard to remember who is who. Similarly I’ve noticed that sometimes the author uses the names of people with our establishing who they are which makes reading a bit more difficult. There are a few writing mistakes as well, e.g. using both he and she for hyena interchangeably. The story definitely does have potential, it’s grammar is good and the update speed is noteworthy, I just hope some minor plot holes can be fixed and things can be made clearer.

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The story has lots of potential, i like the way it first lets us know about the world and its background and gives us context about the kingdoms and their relations. one thing i think could be worked on a big is grammar, there are places where different words replace ones that the author actually meant to use. this is an easy fix via getting an editor or double checking. but anyways good book and great beginning looking forward to seeing where Alex goes

Masterpiece, read if you want a change of pace, story darker than most and mc changes from hesitant to kill to unbothered. Also very enticing fight scenes so read those too probably

Honestly, I'm surprised at the stats for this novel, it should have way more views and power stones. Everything for this novel is great whether it's the grammar, characters etc. I like the idea of getting stronger through the game and it reflects irl because it give the players a reason to try so hard.

The story looks over interesting and promising, I like the idea of Mr Smiley and his world domination. The world-building is amazing but I feel you could go into more depth when describing the character's appearances, me smiley was done perfectly but his fall maid was kind of not. Also grammar is good and no errors

This is going to be hard to review because I can’t really pinpoint anything they’ve done specifically well because it’s all top notch, really the grammar and descriptions are scarily good they make me feel insecure.