LUANA_2025

I loved the interactions of all characters including their personalities. The redeveloping or improving a planet was well done considering taking the perspective of a person who have no understanding how to. What i mean is, i would not expect it to be perfect because Scarlett was not perfect. She did a lot but accept and trust on others with tasks. The emotional building and understanding of main characters was well paced. The only improvement i would recomend is about the text/paragraphs flow. Sometimes these were confusing. Overral, it was a good story. Thank you

I think it is misplaced or like you said, a paragraph link is missing. The change of content/topic was abrupt.

I loved the humor and light moments. Strong but lost characters who still trying to heal after her loss. I felt sad, happy, cried, anger ... laugh a lot and felt lost at the end. It is said there is another 3 chapters but not here so feeling dissapointed. The end was not the end nor was the begining

XJ