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Michael_Desalisa_0228

Michael_Desalisa_0228

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2022-07-30 入りましたGlobal
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_02281mth
    に返信 FBI_LOLI

    Me too. how the heck does he have experience when it is his first time entering the tower of truth

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    Just call me Thor
    都市 · RedBull
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_02286mth
    に返信 Abiskar

    i agree. why are the thoughts and actions so contradictory and have a lot of flaws. like why don't the mc buy a high grade training manual? why does he pay supreme spirit stone each for the sword and dregs it's so fucking stupid

    Ch 11 What a Monstrous Genius, Killing the Black-Armored Evil Ape in One Move!
    Extracting Billions Of Toxins And Tempering An Unsullied Body
    東方 · Superior Human
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
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    Great Story

    Ch 98 Counting the Experts of the Human World (11)
    Max-Level Learning Ability: Facing The Cliff And Repenting For 80 Years
    東方 · Girl In Short Skirt
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_02289mth
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    Thank you so much for the chapters.

    Ch 129 IMUC-CHAPTER 128 AIMING FOR THE STARS
    I Am in Marvel with Unlimited Cards
    映画 · DarkShadow95
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_02289mth
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    so this is how izanagi became the most powerful secret technique of uchiha. xd

    Ch 7 Face the five kages vs one!
    Uchiha: Destroy Konoha at the Start!
    アニメ·コミックス · blankish_myth
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_02289mth
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    this just made izanagi too over over over powered.

    Ch 6 Susanoo!
    Uchiha: Destroy Konoha at the Start!
    アニメ·コミックス · blankish_myth
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_02289mth
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    the arrangements of paragraphs are all over the place. he mentions about something then suddenly mentions other things then back to the first topic. its so confusing. one example of this is the forge. he's just contemplating about companion then suddenly mentions forging .wth

    Ch 3 Resources Chp 3
    In Marvel as Superman
    アニメ·コミックス · DarkHelixDragoon24
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_02289mth
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    cringey but cool lines unlike those chinese novels. great work author san

    Ch 119 IMUC-CHAPTER 118: SUBVERTING HOWARD’S PERSPECTIVES
    I Am in Marvel with Unlimited Cards
    映画 · DarkShadow95
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_02289mth
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    why not use his sensing ability that he got from his esper power?

    Ch 32 Meeting Geryuganshoop
    Transmigrated as Saitama with a Mission System
    アクション · Kurosawa_Taiki
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_02289mth
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    This should be titled god of cliffhangger not god of choice system.

    Ch 90 HXH: G.O.C.S Chapter 91: Passing the Third Phase!
    hxh: god of choice system[Dropped]
    アクション · Anime_World_6808
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_02289mth
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    THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE CHAPTERS. HOPING FOR MORE😊

    Ch 113 IMUC-CHAPTER 112: THE HERO RETURNS
    I Am in Marvel with Unlimited Cards
    映画 · DarkShadow95
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_022810mth
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    too long of a description that instead of making a reader understand the scenario it just made it more confusing. Next time don't write more nonsense just to make the chapter long.

    Ch 1 Interdimensional
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Dimensional
    アニメ·コミックス · EpicBean
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_022810mth
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    Thank for the chapter author-san. Hoping for more amazing chapters and wishing for this amazing work to not be dropped.

    Ch 13 Troubles below the Surface
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception
    アニメ·コミックス · Yesnth
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_022810mth
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    the increase in fan value is obviously because the story is super good. and in my opinion in all of the jujutsu kaisen fanfic i read this has the most consistent and amazing story line. and i hope author-san will continue this story. Thank you so much for the chapter.

    Ch 11 Grinding is Eternal
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Exception
    アニメ·コミックス · Yesnth
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_022810mth
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    this scene is so idiotic. why would a doctor decide to do a crime in a hospital that has a lot of people. shouldn't the scene be like " the doesn't know what to do anymore and out of instinct or something like that he stabs kenji at the heart".

    Seeing that Kenji is not stopping and he can't step back anymore, Yu Xiao decided to commit a crime right here and now.
    Superman in Solo Leveling [Completed]
    アニメ·コミックス · SlimeSage
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_022810mth
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    there are too many inconsistencies in this story. like why did he wait a lon time before he killed brian and lily if he can kill them earlier and still be able to retrieved the shadow and healing crystals. its just too idiotic on the mc's part. and his personality of playing with brian and lily is too childish for someone who have been regressed. also why did he suddenly just jumped from level 1 to level three but didn't get an ability for his space ability becoming level he only got an ability for becoming level 3 nothing for level 2. and also it was not explained that the level for the elemental abilities are separated from his own level. like from the time he met Monica's group it was mentioned that he was a level four esper and i thought it includes his spatial ability being level four also. but then i read somewhere around chapter 90 onwards that he just got his spatial ability to level four so it means that there two factors or elements that he needs to level up. first is maybe we can call it his physical body's level and the second one is his elemental powers level and the author clearly didn't explain this two. so it's too confusing

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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
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    In my experience reading a lot novels especially apocalypse theme almost all the female character in the beginning of the story are those who only rely on the male mc and when they encounter hardship because of the mc they will build up some resentment that causes betrayal so for me i like female characters like sally and i hope she will have more development on her strength and will not betray the mc. thank you for this wonderful story. so far i like the story development and i hope it stays like this

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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_022810mth
    に返信 thatnintendo_fan

    i agree.

    Cold Weapon Combat Lv1 (1/100): You have mastered the basics of cold weapons combat. Strength and stamina have increased by 0.1.
    I Stack Attributes in the Apocalypse
    SF · Cig, Coffee, And Tea
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_022810mth
    に返信 leang

    i super i agree.

    Ch 16 Psychopath
    In Jujutsu Kaisen with Time Cursed Technique
    アニメ·コミックス · David_555
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  • Michael_Desalisa_0228
    Michael_Desalisa_022810mth
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    why is the pronoun for the mc always changes? sometime you use her even though the mc is a boy

    Ch 12 Laxus's challenge
    Fairy Tail: Collapsing Stars
    アニメ·コミックス · nyawdao3
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