Adnan_1

it is not mentionned before that he has a cheat ?

Thats right

Thank you for your reply

Just a question cause I don't know many thing (probably nothing) about the lore of Tolkien but are what you are saying about the mother of Aldril being an adventurer, the power of the axe etc.. canon or you made it to develope the story ?

Wow, the number of greetings is a little too much, no?

does that mean our mc did it ?

I just started and I admit I'm not very enthusiastic. The main character reincarnates because it’s said he has very good karma, but his behavior suggests that if behaving like he does allows you to reincarnate, then I think 80% of the global population would have reincarnated into their favorite universe in their favorite character’s body. Additionally, he receives the memories of 14 years of life with his cousin and uncle, and yet he feels nothing for them! That’s not normal; memories shape who we are, as well as the emotions we feel. If he feels nothing, it’s possible he could be a sociopath. And finally, the way things are written... I must admit it bothers me a bit, but I’m not sure how to describe it. The description doesn’t immerse me in the universe; it feels like the story is set in modern times rather than medieval. But, well, since there are so few fanfics about Eragon, I’ll continue a bit, hoping that it improves.

Then it’s not logical for him to get this reincarnation because I don’t think he has accumulated enough karma by being this way...

I looked at the new one ('Thunder Emperor') and nope I prefer the beginning of this one. It's a shame that you didn't try to write more than one chapter but I don't know what kind of problems you had with the story, so I won't say anything.

wait what, I thought he had like ten skills !!!