College graduate working towards publishing my ideas. Will try to post weekly.
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This is a well done novel adaptation with lots of focus on the details and setting. There are some redundant phrases and words that can be simplified, like there is no need to mention that Nikkes have super strength after Marian throws a vending machine. You can safely assume many people reading this are already familiar with the world of Nikke.
There's such a thing as the stages of grief. Given a situation, not just anyone can be all like "Oh okay!"
Bewilders me why randos like this feel the need to complain about someone promoting their patreon, especially when this story has over 200 chapters. Writers gotta eat too :/