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korazon0032 months ago
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Marvel: Mimicry
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korazon0032 months ago
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A massive explosion erupted behind Laura, spreading dust in all directions. From Zora's vantage point, it appeared as though a giant handprint had been pressed into the desert floor, the military convoy now reduced to powder.
Marvel: Mimicry
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korazon0032 months ago
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comments and suggestions are appreciated, they motivate me!
Ch 6 Chapter 6: Destruction x Recruitment
Marvel: Mimicry
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korazon0032 months ago
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def will be rewriting this chapter
Xavier, always the first to speak, began with a warm smile. "Welcome, Zora. We are the X-Men. I am Professor Charles Xavier, and these are my students," he said, gesturing to the group behind him. "I apologize for the intrusion before, it wasn't my intention to invade your privacy.
Marvel: Mimicry
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korazon0033 months ago
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reading this chapter back its so lackluster, this is a definite fix
Seven seconds later, when he reappeared, he was already above Badlands National Park, 1600 miles from New York.
Marvel: Mimicry
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korazon0033 months ago
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not college
It was a teenage boy, definitely no older than fifteen, with long, curly black hair that currently lay in a mess due to friction during sleep.
Marvel: Mimicry
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korazon0033 months ago
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i used it to edit and improve, i smelt it too but thought it sounded more professional. ill be making changes
Xavier's face grew serious as he absorbed the information. "Very well. Let's respect his wishes and meet him there. Remember, we approach this with diplomacy." He paused, looking at each member of his team, his expression a mix of determination and concern. "We must show him that we mean no harm and that we are here to help, not to threaten."
Marvel: Mimicry
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korazon0033 months ago
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it would actually be more accurate to say mc traveled at 1082 times the speed of sound
"1600 miles in 7 seconds. That's 1000 times the speed of sound... and I felt like that wasn't even my maximum."
Marvel: Mimicry
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korazon0033 months ago
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speed of sound is 0.213 miles/second || 343 meters per second (m/s).
"1600 miles in 7 seconds. That's 1000 times the speed of sound... and I felt like that wasn't even my maximum."
Marvel: Mimicry
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korazon0033 months ago
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Ch 6 Update
Marvel: Mimicry
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Marvel: Mimicry

Zora, reborn in the Marvel Universe, awakens memories of a previous life as a result of activating his X-gene. He must now navigate through this new reality while knowing about the various world-ending level disasters. Mutant Ability - Mimicry: MC can copy the abilities of other mutants and superhumans through three methods. This includes physical, mental, and energy-based powers. The copied powers are retained indefinitely and can be used at will. This will be an AU with changes, just take it as one of the many parallel universes in marvel. There will be other worlds MC visits in the future: Naruto, OnePiece, Hxh. Open to requests.

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