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The attention to detail is unmatched, and the level of grammar is truly exceptional. It’s clear that a tremendous amount of care, expertise, and passion go into every part of this story.

Did he pick engineering in college?

I see two pointy melons, I click. Thats it. As for the book, its obviously good, now go and read it instead of wasting your time here. [img=proud]

The first thing I notice when I wake up is my belly button

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Good start, interesting buildup, the emotions are great. The writing style is pretty good, feels smooth. Keep up the good work author! [img=update]

Thank you for pointing that out! I never really realised I wrote that there xD

I'm glad you liked it!