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Your story is a good one, wonderful character with nice settings, your grammar needs a lot of adjustment, structure and grips tone for better flow, but there is a room for improvement as you keep writing. I must say, this is a good novel. Keep writing and best of wishes!

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Your story is creative, with beautiful grammar, and narration. I must say, this is one of the story that got my heart struck while reading. Keep it up Author.

The story is very nice from the start.

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Wow. Very interesting story. I have flip through it and really enjoy the little bit of the story. I must say, the grammar and writing style is quite okay for everyone to read. Love it!

Interesting chapter getting to know a new character Yo.

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Wow, reading this story keeps me turning up and down. I really enjoyed reading the two chapters so far. Simple and clear piece, please read this piece. Keep it up.

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Wow, reading this story keeps me turning up and down. I really enjoyed every bit of it kind to the fullest. Simple and clear piece, please read this piece.

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Reading this story was great read. Enjoying every page of and chapters of it. Very inspiring characters with nice scene. Simple and clear grammar. I will recommend everyone to read it.

Reading this story was very interesting, nice and motivating characters. With great lessons well invented. I will recommend everyone to read this simple and clear grammar literary piece.

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