Yeahh that's what I am also confused with if every one can gain a territory as the landlady said even if you don't fight to get the first position you could have enough riches to live out your life so why does this landlady is on this line of work instead of making a territory

Ohh I taught he was changing some stuff from the original maybe I got mixed up the fics

Dude it's was already getting annoying you trying to drag the story now you make him start from the start seriously dude correct that or else you will lose almost every readers

Okay

Okay how come he can create charectors and gods in the past does he have power to rewrite history or is he just lying about them

This book is just another cliche wish fulfilment fic mc doesn't have any quality other charectors are one dimensional card board praising mc

Yeahh but giving a author feedback about his mistakes and suggestions are not a bad thing right if he wants to pursue this as a career or simply improve his writing he needs to know his mistakes and correct it doesn't he

Duhh you can't its called rocket science for a reason and dude haki it's hard but not something convoluted like cultivation where you have to open you inner clone or some sh*t and joining cp it's moronic like dude it's a spy organisation built specifically to serve the world gov and it's extremely strict they would kill you if you fail to accomplish a task and how could you join when you don't even know where they are and they only take children to train and brainwash them form start to get their loyalty not this huge ass dude

Dude are you saying that he is wearing a suit in his home in middle of nowhere 😂😂 are you serious he was supposed to be a archeologist right shouldn't he wear something appropriate to his work whatever this a lazy writing

I don't understand the whole blood mist consept clearly I mean what is actually happening I have to read multiple times to get clear image of the fic

Translation needs some work all the sentences doesn't make a clear image it seems incoherent sometimes

I get what you mean I have read these types of fics before but in those the reaction of the natives of that world will be realistic I mean you have a fu*king gov which is super corrupt and is willing to sacrifice entire nations for its intrest soo when you give them future knowledge about a group of who openly disrupt things for them and are a actual threat you should knw their reaction they would actually wipe out every person who match that group description but there was no mention of it they actually won't do anything about it so yeahh it kinda makes seem lazy writing

His name is pink pica is another member

Dude did he not send a single dish to alu there were so many dishes from north blue which would have been unique in alu's world sighhh such wasted chance mc is a moronic idiot

I was thinking that too he should have atleast sent some things to that world but missed the chance

Did he lose memory of both his past life and this one you should have atleast kept one of those memories this is a transmigration fic mc atleast should know what should he do that's the good part of those fics and please make him stop monologuing like Sherlock Holmes it feels cring

It's not that celestial dragon don't bang their slaves I mean they are people portrayed as people who live in excess and debauchery they won't treat others as same level as them but doesn't mean that they won't expect to not satisfy their every desire

Okay mc is not really a 12 year old dude you bragged about mc being super genius who was able to get in Google but he can't even make a living in Naruto where technology is backwards and why does he acts like he has any kind of relationship with people of this world

Oo thank you

Can't he eat human human fruit