The_critcal_thinka
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The_critcal_thinka9mthに返信 U_dnt_kno_me- The_critcal_thinka9mthコメントCh 2 Taking revenge on bullies
- The_critcal_thinka9mthに返信 Daoist26pcQJ
exactly
He proceeded to rip off the first ally's genitals. The shock and pain from the attack killed the ally on the spot. Wasting no time, Niklas quickly moved to the third ally and performed the previous attack on him. The third ally fell to the ground, writhing and shrieking in pain as he profusely bled his way to the afterlife. - The_critcal_thinka9mthに返信 Daoist_art_eternal
on point
"Yes, I have molested your mother on three occasions. I break into the house when you are away, and I do my stuff. From your reaction, I know that she doesn't tell about it so that her lanky twig wouldn't cry." - The_critcal_thinka9mthに返信 Daoist_art_eternal
😂😂😂😂😂
"What in the world! Leave my pee-pee alone! Let go of me, pervert!" the first ally cried, desperately struggling to break free of Niklas' grip. - The_critcal_thinka9mthコメント
author went unhinged in this chapter😂😂😂
"What in the world! Leave my pee-pee alone! Let go of me, pervert!" the first ally cried, desperately struggling to break free of Niklas' grip. - The_critcal_thinka9mthコメントCh 1 Niklas Vox
- The_critcal_thinka1yrコメントCh 3 The Emperor of Camelot (part three)
- The_critcal_thinka1yrコメントCh 2 The Emperor of Camelot (part two)
- The_critcal_thinka1yrコメントCh 1 The Emperor of Camelot
- The_critcal_thinka1yr発表
Another work from Jujumaster. This writing in this one is miles better than the other novels that he has written. Conventionally, the MC of the novel is introduced first. Stories of side characters aren't given much shine. Although it is still early to speak, BONES FLAMES AND ICE seems to indulge in making side characters memorable and not a one-off object. Still some glitches in writing, I think twice within the five chapters but you won't notice AT all because of how indulging the story is. Juju pls make the MC a dragon
- The_critcal_thinka1yrコメント
Is the MC a dragon?
****Author's note: In a couple of chapters, we will meet our MC. I plead that you hang on dear reader.**** - The_critcal_thinka1yrコメント
Aight, I'm gonna add this book to my collections. The words on this paragraph would make good bars if modded into a song.
The red dragon went up and got a good distance between himself and the wall. He stopped ascending and pensively looked down on the wall. There was a glint of guilt in his eyes, but he blinked, and it was replaced by a countenance of infallibility. - The_critcal_thinka1yrコメント
imminent doom
"I think it's bluff," the red-bearded man continued, "the old man was always drunk." - The_critcal_thinka1yrコメント
Boys will always be boys
Another round of laughter erupted. Some of the soldiers lost control of themselves and had to support themselves on the parapets and shoulders of their comrades. - The_critcal_thinka1yrコメント
my goodness 🤦♂️ What a way to start to a story
"After having its fill of rampaging the town, the mammoth headed into a barn and began raping an elephant," a brawny, red-bearded, red haired man narrated to his listeners. - The_critcal_thinka1yr発表
The novel makes me want to laugh hysterically. The writing from the opening pages start somewhat laughable, but from chapter 20+, it gets better. When I say better, I mean drastically better. And that is my major reason of rating the writing quality 3/5 and character design 3/5. One of the cons of the novel is the unexpected short chapters along the line. At the current chapter that I am on, the author makes me wonder if the villains are the ones going to run the show in the novel. But from what I have read, I expect that this novel is going a heck of a ride.