louie_G

I enjoyed this fic all the way into the 346 chapter. It honestly exceeded my expectations but the one problem for me that just kinda made the story drag is it's too filled with filler chapters I mean it was cool at first but after a while it gets old. Don't get me wrong it's a pretty good fic and I do like that dragon lore and other stuff but after a while I just want to read the main storyline without all the miscellaneous adventures the mc goes on really starts to kill my enthusiasm especially when they barely actually add to content then their only mentioned one or two times after. Overall tho pretty good fic if you can deal the really slow pace that is dragged unnecessarily .

I think that last I checked the only thing that by far surpasses the Superbowl in views is the World cup and Champions league. Don't quote me on that tho lol But yes we Americans take our football seriously but then again in Europe they don't play around about theirs either.

btw deleted a comment that was meant for another novel so if you see it in notifications. Not trynna get banned again 🚨

His six eyes awakened I think 🤔

*Difference

*Kabuto

Not to be that guy but the haiku kinda eats the word count and makes it so we have less story in the chapter. It might be a good idea to keep them short or do them once in awhile otherwise people might get sick of it and drop this fic. Just a bit of advice so this hidden gem so far to flourish. Good chapter 👍

Daedric armor

kinda ruined it for me. There is basically no difference between a futa and a guy besides tits . Why give him a curse on top of his already abysmal chances of having male offspring besides some kink that will alienate a lot of potential readers ?