Mikail_Afridi

Uchiha Izuna is madara’s brother so if he is izuna’s son and madara’s grandson, this story has Marie sue character

Do pants and hoodies even exist in that time?

So saeko is actually shin? WHY?? Why did the author name her Saeko then and not Shion for convenience sake

Hopefully veldora will give him a name

Name it Ankseram or something else

Ripp of version of Mavis’s Fairy Heart

Give him ultimate skill god of life and death Ankseram

Please fix the ultear and Ur problem. Ur is the mother and Ultear is the daughter the names are switched in this fic. Please fix that

Well the imprisonment in Azkaban can be justified as trading, hatching and raising of dragons and their eggs is highly illegal and will land u in Azkaban. As for the war it is a bit unrealistic but not that much, it depends on the perspective and as a fanfic it doesn’t necessarily have to follow canon.

Nothing against the author but this is just really unrealistic. It has no character development or a plot to it. Just an overpowered MC and a Harem