Drew_Archeron
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this book is just getting started but it has an interesting plot. still some grammar issues to work through but its a cool plot concept. keep going author!
This is a decent tale but there is a ton of new terms and culture that are thrust upon you at the start with little explanation or word vomit overkill in telling what makes up the world. there isnt a natural progression of information and world building. could be a fun plot over all but one likely needs to be well versed in similar stories and mythology to grasp the concepts in this tale. this is likely not a tale for Someone not familiar with these concepts from previous readings. still an interesting concept, and could be interesting to see where the author takes us in this rebirth tale of revenge and deep bloodlines.
I try to be a fairly harsh critic, and most novels are total trash writing even if they have an interesting plot. this one thus far has been decent writing with a good amount of vivid description without being just oversaturated with unnecessary fluff. That is a huge plus in my book. Keep it up author!
interesting start. should be interesting to find out where this goes!