Hidden Persona
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Even if it is, I don't actually care about the looks at this point, from all the cultivation novels that I've read. I just want to read a story that for me is grammatically correct and has a nice flow.
I think leaf sticking is also part of chakra control training, as you control how much chakra you input on the leaf.
I like how the story goes, even though it's only 9 chapters as of writing this comment. Nonetheless, Your story has Good flow.
Nevermind, I found it
Wasn't it Avalon?
The idea of the story is good. Though there are some inconsistent wordings, like silver sigil then silver shards, as well as the dating of events. the first few chapterr started with August 11 to 13, then after the MC's outside adventure, the next day was dated as august 11 again. At first, I thought it was double posted, but then the Second August 11 was stated as the 2nd week of college.
shouldnt'tit be 14th?
I dont'tknow if it's a good sign but, the first chapter seems familiar, I seem to have read it from some other cultivation novel. but the following chapters are different.
seems familiar..................................................................
me too