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Pilosopoliyo1yrに返信 Akiramitchuapparently yes you're right im sorry
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yes glad you notice
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yes as Ill put more realism to the story but this start ships are future starship as to the design ill let the readers picture it ;)
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yes po and I like sci fi stuff and ill recommend galactic naval officer becomes and adventurer it is hype and much better than this
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sorry about that I'm just new to this so i tried hehe my deepest apologist
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Na stress hahaha Nobel brats am I right hahaha
I gritted my teeth and angrily answered "What do mean inhumane?! And what right do you have to intervene on the Empire's matter? Where the hell is this Republic of the Philippines you are talking about? Aren't you from this island?!". He looked at me coldly and said "You attacked civilians! That's why! And what right do we have? It's because in our law!" I was perplexed and just stayed silently. He took a deep breath to which I presume to calm himself down. - Pilosopoliyo1yrコメント
I like the way you separates the thoughts and dialogs of the charters
He spoke at strange rectangular object and the thing stated "Hello, I'm Captain Ronaldo Brosol. Philippine Armed Forces. I'm here to ask you a few things." I just looked at him and nodded. He put that strange thing near his mouth again and it said "Well, first off. What is your name and country of origin?". As this is not a sensitive information I just answered "Lilylin Laluna tri Denoia, Miserya Empire. I'm a noble of the Empire, I deserve a better treatment than this!". He just smiled at me and said "Well, Miss Lilylin Laluna tri Denoia, we can talk about better treatment later.". He then added "I would like to inform you that you are now a prisoner of the Republic of the Philippines, due to your group's inhumane attack on this town, the Republic decided to intervene. You will stay as a prisoner until this conflict is over, understand?". - Pilosopoliyo1yrコメント
straight to the point gezz at least you put it this way, "dear my fellow citizens of the philippines as it may be shocking to tell you all that the mysterious bombardment of light coming from the sun the other day may be the reason of the lost in communication around the world but according to the staff of defense and pagasa that the surrounding nation despair out of the map as well all communication from the outside world and the stars in the sky don't match with the one we all know of, as we briefly talk about this in the office we came to the conclusion that our dear nation was warp in another place in the universe or time we still do not know the situation we are all in but as we will try to monitor the outcome of the situation, so upon this incident I declare martial law in every part of our nation and mobilize every armed personnel and reserves as well the navy to patrol our ocean and the air force to check the sky of our surroundings may god bless us all . . . φ(*￣0￣) just saying its great so far :3
The President paused and looked straightly the camera "We are in fact in a different world or different planet. Based on our investigation we found that two landmasses have previously been unknown to us, and some people are living there. This Morning, I received a report stating that last night when our Armed Forces' scouting party is observing the landmasses they saw a town. It's being attacked by what looks like a flying monster with medieval-looking soldiers mounted on their backs." The broadcast showed pictures and videos captured, monsters flying and a town being burnt. "The scene is so gruesome that the ground commander requested a clearance to interfere, I, of course, approved it." The broadcast changed to videos of the flying monsters being shut down by Fighter Aircrafts. "That's all I can tell you for now, but I promise that we would investigate what happened so we can answer all of your questions."